-i like the way she presented her ideas and how she trid to portray the way she pictured a fight between a girl and her boyfriend.
- i like the way she used the word " sayang" which shows nativisation.
-the wrong use of punctuation marks, perhaps she did not double checked before posting it
however, things need to be improved is grammar mistakes such as singular and plural mistakes and sopme sentence are not in a proper structure
-use of unnecessary adjectives such as emotionally
- may be she can describe more about the setting.
"nothing is true"
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