Wednesday 23 November 2011

Critiques

Style
-I like the style that she used in this story, the way she started the story and how she express the charcters concern towards his friend. Besides. the style that she used is quite easy for the reader to understand the story. Beside I also like the way she used the word “cha” because it shows the culture of the characters. More over, the way she include other information which happened in the past is quite good.

Suspension of disbelief
-The way she writes is quite clear and easy for the reader to understand what is happening because the setting is real and the character’s behaviors are something which anyone would react when they are in such situation.


Things need to be improve
Language
-In my opinion, I think may be she can improve on the language of her writing, She can improve on the spelling, use more complex sentences and vocabulary to make the context looks rich which can improve the quality of her writing.
Quality of writing

-The quality of the writing also can be improve is she can use more figurative language. It will leave more effect on the readers.

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