Descriptive passage from your story
As preeti stepped into the small wooden dusty room , her hands started to shake, tears fell down from her eyes like river. She stares at the room with her disappointed eyes. The room was far smaller than her room. A grey broken cupboard just located few steps from where Preeti was standing. The windows were covered in mud as if it was not been cleaned for ages. She walked slowly towards the bed as she noticed that there were spider webs around the bed so she decided to just rest herself on the brown cheap tiles. She thought, everything seems to be gloomy now, yet she has to accept the reality that this is how she has to live the rest of her life now. Suddenly, preeti’s mother in law shouted in anger “ preeti! Where are you!”. Preeti wiped her tears and hurrily ran towards the door in a speed of light in her heavy red bridal Saree. "clean the dishes now!" she said with a serious expression on her face. Preeti stood numbly and stared at her mother in law. she was suprised. she dint know how she was supposed to react towards it as she just ask her mother in law permission to change her clothes before she can start washing them.